Poem, published in Pomona Valley Review
Earlier this year, my poem, ‘The Passing Year’ was published in issue 16 of Pomona Valley Review. It was both gratifying and reassuring for me that editors Clem and Whitney chose to use the poem, as I’m particularly fond of it and had already been rejected by eight other publications. Had I not been so attached to it, then I may have decided to abandon the pursuit to publish and leave it on the proverbial backburner, while I concentrated on submitting other works. However, my persistence paid off on this occasion, and I’m so glad that I continued to enter submissions!
Even without the upheaval and turmoil of the COVID-19 pandemic in the past few years I still think it’s fair to say that, when we all look back on our lives over any given year, we experience and bear witness to an incredible range of highs and lows during that short timespan. It’s this bittersweet sense that I’ve tried to encapsulate with ‘The Passing Year’.

It observes the struggle and hardship caused by adversity and how we try to keep going until we encounter better times ahead, but for me it’s also a reminder that when those good times arrive they must be enjoyed and savoured. The places we go to in our lives can play host both to experiences of love and happiness, or hatred and sadness, so our memories of those places can become bittersweet as well, which is something I’ve tried to reflect with the lines:
"These different worlds all in the same space, In transience, come and go from your sight."
Read Issue 16 of ‘Pomona Valley Review’ here, where you’ll find ‘The Passing Year’ at page 228.
By Sam Bartle
Wonderful poem!
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Thank you Dawn!
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Beautiful reflections. Your poem reminds me of Longfellow’s, “A Psalm of Life,” which has gotten me through a lot of tough times. Congratulations on it being chosen for publication at Pomona Valley Review.
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Thank you very much, I think I’ll check out that poem you mentioned!
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You’re most welcome, and I hope you do 🙂
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Nice poem! Thanks for finding me and liking a post, and leading me back to you. I am so with you on the sentiment to enjoy those moments that fleet where we are in the full embrace of happiness.
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Thank you very much!
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your words are a gift. ❣️❣️
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Thank you so much, Cindy 👍
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💗 Welcome!
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Congratulations! Very uplifting poem.
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